I.Introduction
a.Hook- Slums, the regions of every city in the world that are dirt poor.
b.Introducing Slums- A slum is a close housing area with really poor people living in it.
c.Thesis- Slums negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities, a disease-prone place to live, and an unsafe living area overall.
d.Transition- Slums can create over population in cities.
II.Defendable Point 1#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "Over population can cause negative affects on human population such as no enough food and water to supply everyone.
ii.Paraphrase- Overpopulation can make entire cities not supply all the needs for every person living in it.
c.Explanation- Because of the crowded slums that surround cities, there would not be enough essentials of life satisfying everyone's needs.
d.Transition- Slums can make a disease prone enviorment.
III.Defendable Point 2#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect human population by creating a disease-prone enviorment.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "There called flying toilets because people do their business in plastic bags and it just flys around in the wind.
ii.Paraphrase- People who live in slums excrement into plastic bags letting them fly around in the wind.
c.Explanation- Slum people can easily transport diseases such as tuberculosis and e. coli by excrementing into plastic bags and letting them travel through the wind.
d.Transition- Slums could make an unsafe enviorment.
IV.Defendable Point 3#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect people by creating an unsafe enviorment.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "Violence over water, food, and shelter occurs in the deep parts of slums.
ii.Paraphrase- Battles between slum people could occur when the essentials of life are non-existent to one group of slum people.
c.Explanation- Fights between slum people can happen when water, food or shelter are scarce.
d.Transition- This concludes how slums could have negative affects on human population.
V.Conclusion
a.Hook- Slums are the places where you always imagined dirt poor people would live in.
b.Thesis- Slums negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities, a disease-prone place to live, and an unsafe living area overall.
c.Summarize Arguments- Slums can cause overpopulation because of the scarce amount of needs to go around in the city. Slums can cause disease-prone enviorments because of how they dispose of wastes.
Slums can cause an unsafe living area because of violence that can occur when the essentials of life are fought over.
d.Command To Action- Slums exist all across the world, even at one point in the 1930s the U.S. had slums, what does it take to stop this inhumane way of living and how can it be prevented for the future to come.
a.Hook- Slums, the regions of every city in the world that are dirt poor.
b.Introducing Slums- A slum is a close housing area with really poor people living in it.
c.Thesis- Slums negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities, a disease-prone place to live, and an unsafe living area overall.
d.Transition- Slums can create over population in cities.
II.Defendable Point 1#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "Over population can cause negative affects on human population such as no enough food and water to supply everyone.
ii.Paraphrase- Overpopulation can make entire cities not supply all the needs for every person living in it.
c.Explanation- Because of the crowded slums that surround cities, there would not be enough essentials of life satisfying everyone's needs.
d.Transition- Slums can make a disease prone enviorment.
III.Defendable Point 2#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect human population by creating a disease-prone enviorment.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "There called flying toilets because people do their business in plastic bags and it just flys around in the wind.
ii.Paraphrase- People who live in slums excrement into plastic bags letting them fly around in the wind.
c.Explanation- Slum people can easily transport diseases such as tuberculosis and e. coli by excrementing into plastic bags and letting them travel through the wind.
d.Transition- Slums could make an unsafe enviorment.
IV.Defendable Point 3#
a.Main Idea- Slums could negatively affect people by creating an unsafe enviorment.
b.Supporting Evidence
i.Quote- "Violence over water, food, and shelter occurs in the deep parts of slums.
ii.Paraphrase- Battles between slum people could occur when the essentials of life are non-existent to one group of slum people.
c.Explanation- Fights between slum people can happen when water, food or shelter are scarce.
d.Transition- This concludes how slums could have negative affects on human population.
V.Conclusion
a.Hook- Slums are the places where you always imagined dirt poor people would live in.
b.Thesis- Slums negatively affect human population by creating overpopulation in cities, a disease-prone place to live, and an unsafe living area overall.
c.Summarize Arguments- Slums can cause overpopulation because of the scarce amount of needs to go around in the city. Slums can cause disease-prone enviorments because of how they dispose of wastes.
Slums can cause an unsafe living area because of violence that can occur when the essentials of life are fought over.
d.Command To Action- Slums exist all across the world, even at one point in the 1930s the U.S. had slums, what does it take to stop this inhumane way of living and how can it be prevented for the future to come.
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